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Alvani Female Concept

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Alvani female concept idea based on the brief within the culture pack of
*usererror41's LEGENDS OF THE SOLARI (LotS) #LotS-Art-Contest

Thank you to ~reggar for allowing me to use her design for the Alvani Templars of Hannon symbol. Her original piece can be found here so please go take a look! [link]

First attempt so design will change as improvements are made
Image size
1592x3680px 901.46 KB
Make
Nokia
Model
N8-00
Shutter Speed
1/50 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
145
Date Taken
Feb 12, 2013, 9:28:21 AM
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First off, I really like the hair and the outfit, including the headdress. I forgot to mention before that there is a rare crystal that enhances psionic abilities and many psionicists carry them in jewelry. The headdress would be perfect for one. I like how you implemented Reggar's symbol too.

Now on to the suggested changes. The Alvani, while similar to humans, have slightly skinnier heads and (very slightly) longer arms than the average human. Their ears are also pointed, with widely varying angles. The eyes...I'm still undecided whether I want eyes like [link] or more human ones. Which would you prefer?

Overall I love the flowing style you used. It fits with their racial personality. Looking at the length of her hair (indication of status and psionic ability) and the outfit (appears non-military, but proudly displays Reggar's Templar symbol) I would guess that she is a Templar official or diplomat of moderate rank with a high psionic potential.

I hope some of that helps you to refine your concept. Remember though that I'm pretty flexible, so I'm always willing to hear suggestions and opinions.